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PostSubject: --Untitled--   Tue May 05, 2009 9:14 am

HAHAHA, Alba! I got the freakin' poem!

I wait on and on
So that the stars finally come out
Of the lifess skies
So that I'll be with you
And I'll have no doubt

The moon shines high up in the dark
Showing things that I could not see before
I lean against my restrictions
As I look up
I feel like nothing matters anymore

Because

You've become a part of me
If I would lose you
I wouldn't be the same
And as I look up at the moon
I know my love for you is true

All the lies I've spoken
All the promises I've broken
They don't count for me anymore
As now I'm with you
And I know that my love for you is true

How can a photo be pleasant to watch
If there isn't your face on it to see
As I look up at the stars
I feel alone
If there isn't your eyes to illuminate them

I keep on walking
On those dull, lifeless roads, you see
And I fall down
Feeling no life, no urge to continue
But, just for you, I stand up, and become me

Because

You've become a part of me
If I would lose you
I wouldn't be the same
And as I look up at the moon
I know my love for you is true

All the lies I've spoken
All the promises I've broken
They don't count for me anymore
As now I'm with you
And I know that my love for you is true


---------------------------------------------Dedicated to Jenn, written by Bart.
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PostSubject: Re: --Untitled--   Tue May 05, 2009 4:09 pm

I told you that you could pull this off...

Frankly, I think that the end result is much more...touching than the prototypes that we discussed over the chat... Somehow, this means more...
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PostSubject: Re: --Untitled--   Tue May 05, 2009 4:12 pm

whilaroo wrote:
I told you that you could pull this off...

Frankly, I think that the end result is much more...touching than the prototypes that we discussed over the chat... Somehow, this means more...

Yeah, I thought that the two other 'prototypes' we discussed over in the chatbox were kinda, lessay, er, big. <.<;;
So, I thought I could try more gentle. Anyways, thanks, Whil, for motivating me.
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