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CopynPaste Consort

 Number of posts: 2899 Age: 13 Location: Just out of your reach. But always next to you people. Registration date: 2009-02-02
 | Subject: Game Over Fri Apr 24, 2009 6:51 pm | |
| There's no way to go, You turn your head, you see sorrow You end up in a dead end, Yout turn around, walls all around you, Ashes to ashes, you fall down.
This is the Game Over, You've lost the Game, The screen goes black; You've lost all your lives.
In your head, everything is turning. You can't think straight, You walk sideways. Nobody's there around you, Only Grim with his watch.
This is the Game Over, You've lost the Game, The screen goes black; You've lost all your lives.
You yell out of pain, You fall on the ground, Shrivelled, tensed, squirming, You're dead meat. Soon enough you think, You'll be having a long rest.
This is the Game Over, You've lost the Game, The screen goes black; You've lost all your lives. You've lost all your lives. All your lives. Lost. Game Over.
I scribbled this up this morning. Any opinions? PS: I'm writing music to go with it, but I can't find A SITE TO HOST MUSIC. If you find one, tell me. |
|  | | Alba Linsky Senator

 Number of posts: 1019 Age: 15 Location: In the psychadelic groovyness of my mind!!! (sorry, I've just watched "Hair" and I"m a bit over enthusiastic) Registration date: 2008-09-15
 | Subject: Re: Game Over Fri Apr 24, 2009 8:32 pm | |
| Waw, i like that! It's really good. The only problem is that you lot ARE SO PESSIMISTIC AROUND HERE!!! lol Try something about life, beauty, freedon, love... the list's endless! Or maybe that's just me "je vois la vie en rose" lol oh well, i like it all the same. Alba xx _________________ Hair Flow it, show it Long as God can grow it My hair I want it long, straight, curly, fuzzy Snaggy, shaggy, ratty, matty Oily, greasy, fleecy Shining, gleaming, streaming Flaxen, waxen Knotted, polka-dotted Twisted, beaded, braided Powdered, flowered, and confettied Bangled, tangled, spangled, and spaghettied!
Hair (1979) |
|  | | CopynPaste Consort

 Number of posts: 2899 Age: 13 Location: Just out of your reach. But always next to you people. Registration date: 2009-02-02
 | Subject: Re: Game Over Fri Apr 24, 2009 9:18 pm | |
| | Alba Linsky wrote: | Waw, i like that! It's really good. The only problem is that you lot ARE SO PESSIMISTIC AROUND HERE!!! lol Try something about life, beauty, freedon, love... the list's endless! Or maybe that's just me "je vois la vie en rose" lol oh well, i like it all the same.
Alba xx |
It's called eeeeemmmoooooo. *slits wrists* <.< *regenerates* D: Sorry, it's just my style of writing, Alba. But I'll accept your challenge. I'll write a song/poetry of love, and I'm sure you'll like it. *high fives* *gets to work* |
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