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CopynPaste
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PostSubject: Game Over   Fri Apr 24, 2009 6:51 pm

There's no way to go,
You turn your head, you see sorrow
You end up in a dead end,
Yout turn around, walls all around you,
Ashes to ashes,
you fall down.

This is the Game Over,
You've lost the Game,
The screen goes black;
You've lost all your lives.

In your head,
everything is turning.
You can't think straight,
You walk sideways.
Nobody's there around you,
Only Grim with his watch.

This is the Game Over,
You've lost the Game,
The screen goes black;
You've lost all your lives.

You yell out of pain,
You fall on the ground,
Shrivelled, tensed, squirming,
You're dead meat.
Soon enough you think,
You'll be having a long rest.

This is the Game Over,
You've lost the Game,
The screen goes black;
You've lost all your lives.
You've lost all your lives.
All your lives.
Lost.
Game Over.




I scribbled this up this morning. Any opinions?
PS: I'm writing music to go with it, but I can't find A SITE TO HOST MUSIC. If you find one, tell me.
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PostSubject: Re: Game Over   Fri Apr 24, 2009 8:32 pm

Waw, i like that! It's really good.
The only problem is that you lot ARE SO PESSIMISTIC AROUND HERE!!! lol
Try something about life, beauty, freedon, love... the list's endless!
Or maybe that's just me "je vois la vie en rose" lol
oh well, i like it all the same.

Alba xx

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Flow it, show it
Long as God can grow it
My hair

I want it long, straight, curly, fuzzy
Snaggy, shaggy, ratty, matty
Oily, greasy, fleecy
Shining, gleaming, streaming
Flaxen, waxen
Knotted, polka-dotted
Twisted, beaded, braided
Powdered, flowered, and confettied
Bangled, tangled, spangled, and spaghettied!

Hair (1979)
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PostSubject: Re: Game Over   Fri Apr 24, 2009 9:18 pm

Alba Linsky wrote:
Waw, i like that! It's really good.
The only problem is that you lot ARE SO PESSIMISTIC AROUND HERE!!! lol
Try something about life, beauty, freedon, love... the list's endless!
Or maybe that's just me "je vois la vie en rose" lol
oh well, i like it all the same.

Alba xx

It's called eeeeemmmoooooo.
*slits wrists*
<.<
*regenerates*
D:
Sorry, it's just my style of writing, Alba. But I'll accept your challenge. I'll write a song/poetry of love, and I'm sure you'll like it.
*high fives*
*gets to work*
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