http://mysticcreatures.forumotion.com/role-playing-academy-f11/-t1.htm Come here to learn to, or get some positive feedback from your posts! Mon, 23 Mar 2009 18:43:54 GMT 10 http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/6384/mcbanner3lw8.png http://mysticcreatures.forumotion.com/role-playing-academy-f11/-t1.htm http://mysticcreatures.forumotion.com/role-playing-academy-f11/feedback-pl0x-t290.htm Toryn Toryn stood at the entrance to a park in the city of Arsinian, his hometown. The park had benches, swings, trees, and all manner of things you would expect to see in a park, but lacked one thing... People... The war had wiped away all life from this area of the world, and it now lay in darkness, and people avoided it like the plague. No one wanted to be reminded of the tragedy that befell their thought perfect world. Just another way to show that even the greatest, can fall... Toryn thought to ... Role Playing Academy Mon, 23 Mar 2009 00:26:43 GMT http://mysticcreatures.forumotion.com/role-playing-academy-f11/feedback-pl0x-t290.htm#18193 http://mysticcreatures.forumotion.com/role-playing-academy-f11/feedback-pl0x-t290.htm http://mysticcreatures.forumotion.com/role-playing-academy-f11/training-assessment-under-way-t291.htm CopynPaste Merlas snorted and leapt forwards at a canter, her hooves drumming on the forest floor, then a gallop before flaring her wings, taking off into the sky. She whinnied with delight, kicking out and shaking her mane as she climbed higher into the sky. The mare glided in and out of the clouds calmly, enjoying the water dripping down her back and legs. She snorted and started her descent towards a lake in the middle of a forest. She landed at a thundering gallop, meaning to slow down gradually as ... Role Playing Academy Mon, 23 Mar 2009 18:43:54 GMT http://mysticcreatures.forumotion.com/role-playing-academy-f11/training-assessment-under-way-t291.htm#18204 http://mysticcreatures.forumotion.com/role-playing-academy-f11/training-assessment-under-way-t291.htm http://mysticcreatures.forumotion.com/role-playing-academy-f11/reply-to-this-post-t6.htm Shadow Open up a new topic, copy and paste this post, then reply. Use your character name/s as a topic name and some one will come and tell you what, if anything, you can improve. Merlas snorted and leapt forwards at a canter, her hooves drumming on the forest floor, then a gallop before flaring her wings, taking off into the sky. She whinnied with delight, kicking out and shaking her mane as she climbed higher into the sky. The mare glided in and out of the clouds calmly, enjoying the water dripping ... Role Playing Academy Mon, 21 Jul 2008 16:02:15 GMT http://mysticcreatures.forumotion.com/role-playing-academy-f11/reply-to-this-post-t6.htm#6 http://mysticcreatures.forumotion.com/role-playing-academy-f11/reply-to-this-post-t6.htm