Poems

Subject: Poems Tue Feb 03, 2009 8:05 pm

Lol, k. This is kinda of an everything poem topic. Well, mostly mine, actually. (Yes, I am that egoist...) I have a mostly morbid writing for poems, almost on the ledge of emo D:
But, I guess I can't break that. Anyways, enough chit-chat, let's get to serious business.

-Unknown title. Help?
50 men lying dead
They've all been shot in the head

They've all been killed before the sunrise
This is their soul's demise

For them, there is no tomorrow
Their families now live in sorrow

The Gods have no mercy now
Everyone has to do their death bow.
---Pencil Sketch.

Imagination...
I saw the man on the moon
I saw Voldemort, trying to get THE ring,
and Sauron owning Harry Potter.

Clouds are white because faeries didn't have enough red paint
I have an identity crisis; I think I'm Spiderman
And Spiderman thinks he's Tobey Maguire.

Once Lucky Luke go shot by his shadow
Dracula once asked for a flashlight
then we saw a pile of ashes in the night

The 10 people in the proverb
'1 lost, 10 found'
are all the ex-husbands of your ex-girlfriend.

Once God tried to do another religion
One where he would be named Cod
and that's why the fish is the sign of God.
---Pencil Sketch.

Critiques and Compliments, please!

Subject: Re: Poems Tue Feb 03, 2009 8:38 pm

:O

I love them!!!!

Omg ... they're really really good...

You're so talented well done!

*grumbles*

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"I spent most of last night dragging this lake,
for the corpses of all my past mistakes.
sell me out - the joke's on you,
we are salt - you are the wound.
I'm the kind of kid
that can't let anything go.
But you wouldn't know a good thing
if it came up and slit your throat."

- 'My Heart Is The Worst Kind Of Weapon’
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Subject: Re: Poems Tue Feb 03, 2009 9:01 pm

Really?
But-but-but... I only spent like a quarter hour...
D:
Anyways, thanks for the compliment!

So... you sure that I'm not an emo? D:

Subject: Re: Poems Tue Feb 03, 2009 9:47 pm

Hey, look in the writing thread at some of the poems there, and tell me these aren't emo lol. Ad yes there's a writing section under creativity if you want to have a look.

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Plays: Shadow - Raven - Shaeman - Vrael - Archangel - Onyx - Twilight - Eclipse -
Nightmare - Akito - Merlas - Teran - Wraith - Cika - Shiraku - Neku - Kia

Subject: Re: Poems Wed Feb 04, 2009 7:13 am

These or those?
Anyways, K, I saw most of the poems back there. They're actually really good. Better than mine, anyways...

Subject: Re: Poems Fri Feb 06, 2009 8:07 pm

Heya, Bartyyy!!! lol, random
I love your poems! i ADORE the line "Clouds are white because faeries didn't have enough red paint"
It's so poetic, i love the idea!!!

Alba xx

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Hair
Flow it, show it
Long as God can grow it
My hair
I want it long, straight, curly, fuzzy
Snaggy, shaggy, ratty, matty
Oily, greasy, fleecy
Shining, gleaming, streaming
Flaxen, waxen
Knotted, polka-dotted
Twisted, beaded, braided
Powdered, flowered, and confettied
Bangled, tangled, spangled, and spaghettied!

Hair (1979)

Subject: Re: Poems Fri Feb 06, 2009 8:38 pm

Alba Linsky wrote:

Heya, Bartyyy!!! lol, random
I love your poems! i ADORE the line "Clouds are white because faeries didn't have enough red paint"
It's so poetic, i love the idea!!!

Alba xx

Oh, hey, Alba!
Yeah, I guess I have some poetry talents. If find that odd. It's kinda weird, really, for me to do this kind of stuff, and I don't read much. The lines just appear in my head instantly. I flick, and I got it.
Anyways, thanks. Now, I just need the title for the first poem...

EDIT--
Oh yeah, btw, did you people notice? New avatar is new. I wanted to make a short animation for Bart transforming into Kraferr. I think it's pretty good. Edited by two poses of Neku from 'The World Ends With You', a pretty good game.
I need opinions please.

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Subject: Re: Poems Wed Feb 18, 2009 11:42 pm

I love emo's anyway.
And dont listen to Lu about what emo's are. She's jut stereotypical about them.
Like most people.
*grumles*

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"I spent most of last night dragging this lake,
for the corpses of all my past mistakes.
sell me out - the joke's on you,
we are salt - you are the wound.
I'm the kind of kid
that can't let anything go.
But you wouldn't know a good thing
if it came up and slit your throat."

- 'My Heart Is The Worst Kind Of Weapon’
x

Subject: Re: Poems Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:27 pm

OMG Hannah! I am not steriotypical about emos! Are you seeking to MAKE me unpopular with everyone now?!...and I'm insulted that you think I'm the same as 'Most people."

It's not even funny of fair anymore...
I love emos so much. I have alot as my friends, and I'm a slight emo myself in how I dress at times.

LucyXX

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Craig Coates...Alot like myself
"I am Hans De Lag Shar from Gaaaaamany"
"I refuse to diminish my character to survive...I refuse!"
"Fortune favours the bold."
"Anyone who is part of team Britney will not be hated..."
PROUD MEMBER OF TEAM BRITNEY!

Subject: Re: Poems Sat Feb 21, 2009 12:53 pm

Another poem, by... Me, duh :/
Your death was useless. Amen.
You were just standing there
Your eyes blank
Your mouth revealing a trickle of blood

You were just lying there
Doing nothing
In the middle of the battlefield

I didn't get you
I was too scared
But I loved you

I weeped in the hole
I was living in for 3 years
Only having rats for company

Your death was useless
But I loved you
Amen

--Pencil Sketch

This poem, I thought about it when I was thinking about the first world war in my bed last night, looking at a painting of a sad woman and a man coiling his arms around her.
I can get some really random ideas sometimes :/

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Subject: Re: Poems Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:02 pm

I like it. I doesn't rhyme but it's good.
As i said, I like it.

Alba xx

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Hair
Flow it, show it
Long as God can grow it
My hair
I want it long, straight, curly, fuzzy
Snaggy, shaggy, ratty, matty
Oily, greasy, fleecy
Shining, gleaming, streaming
Flaxen, waxen
Knotted, polka-dotted
Twisted, beaded, braided
Powdered, flowered, and confettied
Bangled, tangled, spangled, and spaghettied!

Hair (1979)

Subject: Re: Poems Sun Feb 22, 2009 8:44 am

Yeah, I'm running out of ideas. I need to de-stress about school now. I need to work. Well, de-stress. Er, I don't know.

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